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As the sun vanquished the night sky and the light began to seep across the land, I awoke from my slumber to get ready for my 4th day at the academy.

Last night was hell for me, especially after my little episode with Anxiety. After I went to sleep, I had a really bad nightmare where I was on a plane that was falling out of the sky and about to crash. Luckily I woke up just before the collision, but it was still terrifying to see.

What didn’t help my pain was that after I awoke from my nightmare, I began to notice a small pool of blood in a bucket I placed next to my bed. “Great…” I said to myself. “My wounds opened up again.”

As I pulled the covers off, I raised my right arm to inspect the damage. I can’t explain what happened but after an incident, my arms got 2nd degree burns and I lost a lot of skin on them. After Surgery was done, the doctors told me that it would take several months for the new skin they placed on my wounds to fix the damaged skin cells and to be careful not to damage it. It has been 3 months since then and it has slowly working as the really burned parts of my arms are now a pinkish color, almost resembling my skin color.

As I walked over to the bathroom to clean my arms, I began to slowly piece together what happened last night during my anxiety attack. “Okay so after that girl left, Pixov and I talked to those 3. I then got anxious when I began to wonder who she was and why she looked so familiar.”

Once I finished cleaning myself up, I put my hands together. “Okay, so I know what happened then.  Now I need to find a way to calm the hell down when that happens again.”

As I left the bathroom and got ready for class, I heard a knock at the door as I put my jacket on. “Who is it?” I asked.

“It’s Pixov.”

“Ah, okay. Doors open.”

I heard the door slowly open up as I saw Pixov walk into the room without his bag. “Something wrong man?” I asked him.

“Nope. I just want to let you know that classes are cancelled today.”

I sighed in response. “Geez, and I was about to get my bag ready too.” I then smirked. “Well thanks for letting me know man.”

“No problem man. I’m going to go to the gym and get some practice, you want to come?”

I nodded my head. “Sure. I got nothing better to do anyways.”

Pixov chuckled. “Great, I’ll see ya in a bit.” He then closed the door and I heard him walk away.

As I locked my door and began my walk towards the gym, I saw that girl again a few feet away talking to one of the students. I wondered if I should go over there and ask for her name for a bit but by the time I finished my thought, she was already gone.

It took me a couple minutes but I was able to find the gym and I saw Pixov waiting there at the front doors flipping a coin.  “Hey David, what took you so long?”

I rubbed the back of my head and smirked, “Sorry Pixov, it took me a while to find the place.”

“It’s all good. Let’s go.”

I followed Pixov inside the gym, which barely had anyone in it aside from a couple students. It had a lot of weights and exercise equipment inside the room and it certainly was huge, but I noticed that not a lot of people were inside using it. As we walked around for a bit, Pixov started talking. “So man, you lift?”

“Not really.” I responded.

“It’s all good. Some of us enjoy it more than others.”

We eventually came to a stop when we found a weight lifting bench and Pixov decided to use it. As he got ready to lie on the bench, he began to ask me something. “Hey David, can you put an extra 30 pounds on each side? I want to lift twice my body weight.”

I nodded my head and I went to grab the weights. When I picked up the weights, Pixov noticed I was carrying both weights on each hand. As soon as I finished putting them on the barbell, Pixov smirked. “What’s this about not lifting weights David? I just saw you carry 60 pounds with little difficulty.”

I responded, “Well I obviously do train, just not as often. My parents have a lot of crap to move around and my dad can’t do it, so my mom makes me move the stuff. As such, I have to train every couple weeks so that I can at least lift up to my body weight. Now then, I’ll be your watch and you do your lifting.”

Pixov smirked. “Thanks dude. You don’t look like you can lift up to your body weight but I guess that’s why you have a loose jacket. Anyways, here we go.”

For the next hour or so, I watched Pixov lift about 240 pounds over his head. At first, I was worried that he wouldn’t be able to lift all of that weight and he did struggle in the beginning. But after about 10 minutes, he began to lift it without much difficulty and was able to lift the weights for the rest of the hour.

Once Pixov put the barbell back in its spot, I heard him panting really hard. As soon as I heard this, I reached over to my left side and gave him a bottle of water. As he got up, he began to chug the bottle really quickly as sweat began to appear on his face. He finished that bottle in like a minute, which surprised me because I didn’t think he was that dehydrated.

As he continued to pant, albeit slower this time, he smirked. “Thanks man, I really needed that.”

I smiled back. “No problem dude. You sure you should be lifting that much weight if you’re panting that hard?”

“Positive. It just takes me a while to get used to the weight. After a while, I can lift it without much effort.”

As he got off the bench, he grabbed his towel and wiped the sweat off his face. “So David, tomorrow is Saturday. There are no classes on the weekend, so I was wondering if you wanted to be my watcher for the next couple days?”

I chuckled in response, “Sure man, you clearly need someone to make sure you don’t over-exert yourself in this. I’m in.”

Pixov chuckled back. “Just like how you need someone to make sure you don’t lose it like you did yesterday.”

I began to laugh and so did he. After a while though, we stopped laughing and Pixov threw the towel on his shoulder. “Anyways man, I’m going to go take a shower and then take a nap. So I’ll see ya later.”

“Okay, later dude.” I replied back.

As we walked out of the gym, I began to walk back to my dorm room. During my walk however, I saw that red-haired girl again talking to Chesslea. As I walked over to the two, I saw the red-haired girl walking away from her and I put up my hoodie so that she didn’t see me. Thankfully she didn’t see me and as soon as she left my field of vision, I took my hoodie off and talked to Chesslea. “Hey Chesslea, who was that girl you were talking to?”

“Oh hey David. That was one of the exchange students from Saint Violet.” Chesslea replied.

I rubbed the back of my head. “That’s like the second time I’ve heard that name. What even is that place?”

“It’s a school much like this one, but much larger.”

“Ah, okay. Well sorry to bother you Ms. Chesslea.”

As I began to walk away, Chesslea said something when I was right beside her. “Do you want to know her name?”

After  I heard that, I stopped walking and I froze in place. As my eyes widened, I replied “Yes please…”

“Her name is Susan.”

My eyes widened in response to hearing that. “S. S.Susan! No! Why her!”

Chesslea noticed this moment of fear and spoke up. “Are you okay?”

I shook my head and proceeded to scratch the back of my head. “I’m okay, sorry about that. Thank you for the name Chesslea and I’ll see you around.”

As I walked away from her and reached my dorm room, I quickly closed the door and began to pant again. “No, no, no. It can’t be… Of all the people I could’ve run into, why does it have to be her!” Sweat began to form across my face and my chest began to tighten.  As soon as I noticed this, I quickly ran to the bathroom with more sweat appearing and I splashed some water on my face. As my body began to cool down and as I began to take deep breaths, I felt my chest beginning to loosen and I felt the sweat beginning to fade.

It took a few minutes for me to fully calm down but once I did, I turned off the bathroom light, took my shoes off, and lied in my bed for a bit. “I just can’t believe it… Susan is in this school as well? I can’t believe this…”

I didn’t say anything else for the next couple minutes as I looked at the ceiling and began to ponder what I should do. “It’s only a matter of time before she notices me. What should I do then? Should I pretend those are two different people? Should I tell her the truth? It could kill her…”

I continued to ponder for the next little while until I stopped looking at the ceiling and came to a decision. “Until that happens, I must completely ignore her.  This whole thing is causing me nothing but anxiety and pain right now and I really don’t need that in my life…”

And so, I spent the rest of the day watching Television until it was time for me to go to sleep. Once I turned off the TV, I received a text message on my phone. When I turned my phone on and went to my messages, my eyes widened when I found out who sent the message. It was Jay Ino.

As I read the message, my eyes widened. “David, I challenge you to a fight in two weeks. If you chicken out, everyone will know how much of a failure you really are. If you do accept, you’ll get your butt kicked. You can’t beat me David, you never will. So two weeks from today, we fight!”

Once I finished the message, I put the phone away and began to clench my fists. “Oh for crying out loud! Do I really need this shit too! Well fine Jay, if it’s a fight you want, it’s a fight you’ll get!”

Over the next couple days, I spent some time watching Pixov weight-lifting and after he was done that, I began to train myself for the upcoming fight. After that, I went straight to my dorm room and read up on techniques that I could learn in Northern Shaolin.

Aside from that, nothing much really happened to Pixov or I. Hell, Jay and Duke didn’t even talk to us or antagonize us. I guess they knew I was going to fight Jay after all.

For my first week at Santa Verde, it was pretty interesting. I made a new friend, met some interesting people, and had some surprises along the way.

But I had a feeling somewhere, in the back of my mind that the next two weeks were going to be even harder on me than this one…
David Grimm Chapter 4: Explosive Day!
Here is chapter 4 of my Emerald Chronicles Fan Character story. Somewhat based on Episodes 5-7 of Emerald Chronicles.

In this chapter, David and Pixov train and David's anxiety gets worse when he learns the name of the girl.

Emerald Chronicles was created by :iconzutzucrobat55:
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As the sun rose over the horizon, my body also rose for the third day of school at Santa Verde Academy.

Yesterday, Pixov and I attended Reynaldo Johnson’s class and we were paired up in order to get to know each other. But the teacher specified that one of us needed to be shirtless in order for the exercise to work.

I made up some excuse to Pixov as to why I couldn’t take my shirt off and he was cool with it, showing off a couple tattoos on his arms that looked like flaming skulls. Why did I make an excuse? Because I don’t like taking off my shirt for anyone… Well, except for one person, but that was months ago.

There’s also another reason, but I don’t feel comfortable revealing it to anyone, not even that one person knows. Anyways, the two of us were able to complete the exercise before the moon came up but when we got back, Pixov was too weak to unlock his door. So I offered to let him sleep on the dorm couch in my room and he fell asleep the moment his head hit the pillow.

When I got up however, I noticed that he was gone and a note was on the table. When I walked over to read it, it said “Hey man, thanks for letting me crash on your couch last night. I guess were even huh? :P . Anyways, see you in class man. ~Pixov.”

After I finished reading the letter, I chuckled a little bit before I got ready for class. It took me about 10 minutes to get all washed up and about 5 minutes to grab my books since like a dumb-ass; I put them on a bookshelf near my bed. Believe it or not, it used to be worse back home because I also had to clean my glasses and find them before I even left the house. Luckily, I don’t need glasses anymore but now I am rambling.

So I locked up my Dorm Room and headed off to my class that day. “So according to the schedule, today’s class is taught by someone named Isaac Winters. Winters, seriously? I guess his family must have a short life-span then.”

It took me about 10 minutes to find the class, which looked like a dojo, but when I showed up, I noticed a few new faces in comparison to the previous 2 days at the academy.  Some of them didn’t really stand out to me, but one of them I did notice was a red head wearing bracelets that was near the front of the class. She looked familiar, but before I could ponder it in further, I felt a hand touch my shoulder.

“You see her too, don’t you?” Pixov said.

I smirked as Pixov took his shoulder off and stood next to me. “Hey Pixov. But yes, she looks familiar for some reason.”

But Pixov just chuckled. “Well ya, she’s a Strawberry.”

I tilted my head in confusion. I was seriously dumb-founded by what Pixov said. “Nah, I’m just messing with ya. She’s a red-head, the only red-headed student in this school it seems. Betting you anything that someone’s going to ask her out.”

As Pixov said this, I began to wonder. “Why does she look so familiar?”  When he finished though, I responded “Probably. But it’s not a big deal right now.”

Pixov shrugged his shoulders in response. “Fair enough dude. I already got a girlfriend back home so I’m not going to waste my time asking. You going to ask her out though?”

I also shrugged my shoulders in response. “I’m not sure Pixov, if she notices me; maybe I’ll talk to her. If not, then oh well.”

After I finished my sentence though, the teacher dropped down from the ceiling and landed on his feet with no difficulty. “Dude’s a ninja. Has to be.” Pixov remarked with a smirk on his face.

“That is somewhat true, young man. My name is Isaac Winters and I will be training you in Basic Combat. You may also know me as Reaper.”

One of the students fanboyed in response to hearing the name Reaper, while Pixov just face palmed.

Isaac continued. “My accomplishments aside, this class will teach you the basic skills required to survive out in the fields. Knowing these techniques will benefit you, especially when you run out of energy to use your abilities. Basic Combat however should not be treated as a luxury. It’s a last resort when superpowers just won’t cut it. Use it wisely.”

After his speech, he proceeded to pair everyone up for his first exercise. Pixov and I got paired up again and the girl with the bracelets got paired up with some random dude from the same Exchange Program as us. Luckily, she didn’t see Pixov or I, but something was still up about her. Another thing I did notice however was that Andy was paired up with the 4th best of the main division of the Academy. I wonder why that is?

Once everyone got paired up, the teacher explained in further what the exercise was. “You will engage your partner in a sparring match. Some of you may know basic combat already, while some of you are learning about this for the first time. This will allow me to see what everyone here is capable of doing. Okay, it’s combat time!”

As Pixov and I walked over to our spot in the Dojo to spar, we decided to talk to the other. “So Pixov, what’s your experience with combat?” I asked him.

Pixov smirked, “I have had some experience with it. My dad was a hard-ass sometimes but he knew a lot about Martial Arts.”

I smiled in response. “Neat, I have some experience as well.”

“In what?”

My smile quickly turned into a smirk. “You’ll find out.”

Pixov chuckled in response. “Ah, surprises. I love surprises.”

When we arrived at the spot, we took our positions and began our fight. Pixov quickly charged towards me with his right hand curled into a fist and his left hand in a paper-like shake.  I jumped into the air before he could hit me with his attack and I managed to get behind him. Before he could turn around, I lifted my right leg into the air and did a sweeping kick near his legs, causing him to lose his balance and hit the floor.

As Pixov got back up from the attack, he curled his hands into fists and charged at me with his right fist near his face and the other fist near his stomach. While I prepared to grab his fists however, his technique suddenly changed as when he got closer, he put his fists on top of each other and began to slide towards me. I tried to jump and get out of the way but Pixov was too fast and hit me in the stomach, sending me up into the air while Pixov slid into the wall and used the force of the slide to bounce off said wall and head into the air to continue the fight. As I regained my balance, I saw Pixov coming towards me with his hands looking like he was grabbing a ball. Before he could attack me with his technique however, I managed to bounce off the ceiling, get behind Pixov and hit him in the back with a kick. As the two of us hit the ground, I noticed Isaac was staring at the two of us and this caused my skin to crawl. “Oh shit… The teacher saw that…”

As Pixov got up and dusted himself off, he noticed my fear and spoke up about it. “Yo David, what’s up?” I didn’t respond, so when Pixov turned around, his eyes widened.

As everyone else in the room finished up their sparring matches, we all regrouped. “Class Dismissed.” Isaac said.

The other students had left the room after hearing that, but Pixov and I stayed behind because the two of us had a feeling the teacher wanted to talk to us. As it turns out, we were right as he turned his focus on us.

“Techniques from Northern Shaolin, Leopard Boxing and Dragon Boxing. I am surprised that you two even know those techniques at such a young age. How is this possible?”

The two of us didn’t say anything. I didn’t know how Pixov felt about the situation, but I was terrified. I didn’t want anyone else to see that and now everyone in the class knew.

As we stood in silence, Isaac sighed. “Boys, what you did weren’t against the rules or anything. You won’t get expelled for using those techniques in my class. I just want to know how you know about those techniques.”

I didn’t respond, but Pixov decided to answer Isaac’s question. “Well Mr. Winters, my father taught me Kung Fu when I was growing up, and one of the techniques he’d make me practice until my fingers bleed were the Buddha Fist style. I was only able to learn Leopard and Dragon by the time I came here but I know there are more my dad probably wants to teach me when I get home. Aside from that, my knowledge is basic at best.”

Isaac nodded his head in response to Pixov’s answer. “Interesting. So your father must have been a Kung Fu master or something. What about you David?”

I hesitated at first but eventually, I spoke up. “Ever since I was 6, my mother trained me in the ways of Northern Shaolin. She seemed to know a lot about it when the Mo. Sorry, wrong movie.”

As I tried to correct myself, I noticed that Isaac curled his brow. “What I meant to say was that she seemed to know a lot about Northern Shaolin when we got attacked by burglars. Sorry about that, when I get nervous sometimes, I say stupid things.”

Isaac responded. “I see. Well that is all I need to know, you both did a good job with the exercise today and I will let you two get back to your dorms or whatever you kids do.”

“Thank you Mr. Winters.” Pixov and I responded in unison.

Isaac nodded his head and we left the class. But after we left, Isaac began to ponder to himself. “Why did David stumble like that when he was speaking with no issues before that point? What is he hiding? Could he be a spy for some evil organization? I better check with the Headmaster to make sure…”

As Pixov and I walked down the hallway, my feeling of worry quickly dissipated while Pixov began to speak up. “That was a close one man, I thought for a minute there we’d get expelled.” Pixov then chuckled.

I chuckled back. “Ya that was a close one.”

As we laughed it up, we heard a bunch of people talking around the corner and decided to go check it out. When we peeked our heads out, I saw that red-headed girl with the bracelets talking to Andy, Federico and that girl with the pink outfit.  But there was something different about the girl this time; her bracelets were slightly red now. “Why is that?”

“That’s nice… Now if you excuse me!” the girl said before walking away from them. Thankfully, she walked down a different hallway so she wouldn’t spot Pixov or I and we proceeded to talk to the three.

“What’s her problem?” Pixov asked.

“No one knows uhh..” Chessley responded.

“Pixov.”

“Oh. No one knows Pixov. She hasn’t really said much to anyone in this school since she got here.”

“Yeah, it’s kinda weird.” Federico replied.

“Agreed.” Andy responded.

But while those three were talking, I began to ponder. “That girl seems familiar, but why is that? Even her voice sounded familiar…”

But before I could continue my pondering, Chessley(the girl in pink) asked me a question. “Hey David, are you okay? You kinda zoned out for a minute.”

I rubbed the back of my head and chuckled. “Sorry about that. Yes I am okay. Probably just tired though so I am going to go take a nap. Talk to you guys later!” I quickly ran off to my dorm room without saying anything.

When I got inside and locked my dorm room up, I began to pant.  This lasted for a couple minutes before I took a deep breath and calmed down. “Jesus…”

I slowly walked towards my bed, took off my jacket and put the blanket over my body. As I tried to fall asleep, I slowly noticed that the blanket was over my face… As I pulled it down so I could breathe, I noticed that the top of the blanket was wet. “Was I sweating earlier? I don’t remember what happened. I just remember talking with Pixov to Andy and the others and then I ended up here.”

As I tried to piece together what happened in-between, I felt my chest tightening. As soon as I felt that, I realized what happened and my eyes widened.

“I had an anxiety attack…”
David Grimm Chapter 3: Combatting the Past
Here is chapter 3 of my Emerald Chronicles Fan Character story.

In this chapter, David and Pixov show off their Combat Skills, and a flaw with David shows up.

Emerald Chronicles was created by :iconzutzucrobat55:
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Today was a big day for me. After my terrible performance in the Doomsday Test yesterday, I plan to improve myself by training hard both physically and mentally.

As I got ready for my first day of classes, I overheard a couple exchange students outside of my dorm room talking about something. As I pressed my ear to the door after putting on my jacket, I listened closely to their conversation.

“Say, did you hear about the girl with the bracelets?” One guy with a high pitched voice asked.

The other person responded, “Yes, what a loser. She doesn’t seem to like most of the guys here and seems to be silent from everyone else.”

While I was listening, I was also left curious by the conversation ”Who could they be talking about?”

“I heard she is some loser from that tiny school named Saint Violet. That school sucks.”

“I know right.”

My eyes widened. ”Saint Violet?”

But before I could question it further, the two people outside my dorm room walked away in silence. As I turned around, I noticed that class was going to start in 15 minutes. After I got my stuff ready for class, I locked my dorm room up and began my walk towards my first class of the day. ”According to my schedule, I have a class with a guy by the name of Jen Hawkins. Thank god these things have the room number written on these things, otherwise I’d have to walk around with a friggin map.”

As I reached the room, I opened the door with 5 minutes to spare and saw a few of the students and exchange students sitting around waiting for the teacher. Though I did notice some of the exchange students weren’t here for whatever reason. No one noticed me when I came in, and as I closed the door, I put my bag next to the door and sat down next to some guy who was also an exchange student.

“Hey.” The exchange said to me with a bored expression on his face.

I turned around to face him with a neutral tone. “Hello.”

He didn’t say anything in response, so I just turned away from him and waited for class to begin. The only other students that showed up were those red and green guys and a girl with a pink outfit and what looked like dark pink hair. As they took their seats, the teacher appeared from what appeared to be a black hole and introduced himself with a French accent to his voice.

“Good morning students, my name is Jen Hawkins. For the next four years, I will be your instructor for practice missions. These will be set in a virtual world, where you will venture on your first week here. You will have the same mission to accomplish and you will get three chances to complete it this week. Keep in mind that you MUST complete this practice mission in order to have a chance of passing this course. Now then, it’s time to pair you guys up. ”

As the teacher began pairing up the students, I noticed that he was pairing up the exchange students with only the exchange students, while the ones not from the program are also paired up with only each other. As I wondered why, I heard my name being paired up with a guy by the name of Pixov. As I wondered who that was, the guy next to me tapped me on the shoulder. “That’s me David. I’m Pixov.”

I turned my head to face him and I replied with a smile, “Nice to meet you Pixov” You see, back home, I had an easy time making friends because of my personality and because I wasn’t scared to meet new people. While I do hate the idea of change, especially this crap, I might as well try and make some friends in this school who can put up with a loser like me, especially  if I am going to be stuck here for the next 4 years.  

Pixov smiled back.

After he paired everyone in the room up, the teacher continued. “In order to complete this mission, you must work as a team.  The person I paired you up with will be your partner until you graduate so get to know them as best as you can. Otherwise, you will be kicked out of the Academy. Now some of you might have noticed that some of the exchange students aren’t here. That is because some of them are training to become assistant superheroes. Think of super-powered doctors/nurses and that would be an accurate depiction of them. As such, they don’t need this class. Now then, let’s begin with the first group: Jay Ino and Duke Zeta.”

After the teacher finished his speech, he walked away from the circle as two students walked towards it. One wore a white shirt with SD written on it, and the other one had his arms crossed and was wearing a striped shirt.

“Good luck you two.” Jen said.

“Ya, like we’ll need it.” Jay Ino replied.

As the two were teleported away, I rolled my eyes in response. “What a douchebag.”

All of a sudden, a TV screen appeared above the circle and showed the two students fighting what looked like a golem. As the minutes passed on, the two were able to defeat the golem creature and pass the Exam.

As I looked at the screen in shock, Pixov crossed his arms. “There’s a reason why that guy is at number 1 and that Duke guy is number 2. They are incredibly strong.”

As I snapped back to reality, I looked to Pixov and replied, “Geez, and putting those two together is like putting dynamite next to a match.”

Pixov nodded his head. “Exactly. Look David, we may not know each other but it seems that we’re going to have to work together if we want to stay in this academy. So when we go in there, we need to work as a team. You got that?”

I nodded my head in agreement. I didn’t know much about this guy but since I am stuck with him for this exam, I will have to trust him in order to stay in this place.

The two of us waited anxiously for our first attempt at this exam as everyone else took their turn. We waited for about an hour before Jen called our names. As we stepped on the circle, we were wished good luck by the teacher and I nodded my head as a sign of thanks.

When we arrived in the virtual reality world, Pixov knelt down on the sand-like ground and observed the golem. “Hmm. Looks like a Rock creature. That means the only way to knock it out is to hit it with a lot of energy.” Pixov said.

“Okay, but what should we do Pixov?” I responded.

Pixov let out a sigh and got out of his kneeling position so that he could stand up and face me. When he faced me, he had an annoyed look on his face. “First, let’s figure out a plan. What’s your power man?”

“I can give life to inanimate objects.”

Pixov smirked, “Perfect, distract him for a bit while I get ready.”

I tilted my head in confusion. “Wasn’t that the same strategy as the other guys? I’m sure the golem will notice that.”

Pixov reached into his pocket and pulled out a toothpick. As he put a bit of it in his mouth, he replied, “Ya, the gay way. Now he’ll see a more METAL way. So get going.”

I nodded my head in agreement. As I ran towards the golem like creature, he swung one of his arms at me. As it got closer though, I slammed one of my hands to the ground and used my ability on it. As the arm was less than a foot away from my face, the sand around me transformed into a pair of hands and caught the arm. As the golem tried to break free, the pair of sand hands held on tight and wouldn’t let go.

“Good job David, now it’s my turn. That Asian prick thinks he can up me! SUCK ON THIS!” As I turned around, I saw Pixov in the air holding up a black electric guitar and a pick in his left hand. I put the arm I used to give life to the sand back down and the pair of hands disappeared. As the golem tried to attack me again, Pixov began to play his guitar. While I just heard the sound of the guitar, the golem began to split apart. I didn’t understand what was happening at first, but when I looked closer at the golem, I began to figure out Pixov’s ability. “This guy is turning the frequency generated from his guitar into deadly shockwaves?”

As I finished the thought in my head, the golem had begun to explode. As the remains began to rain from the sky, the two of us were teleported out. While Jay was glaring at the two of us and the other classmates looked on in shock, Jen smiled. “Congratulations David and Pixov, you passed the exam.”

“Awesome.” I said with a smile.

I turned to face Pixov, who was not only smirking but also held out his left arm for a fist-bump. After I gave him one, he replied “Great job man.”

When we returned to our seats, we saw the other classmates attempt the exam. This went on for about an hour when the bell rang just before Federico, that red guy, and Andy, the green guy were about to take the exam.

As I walked out of the room with my backpack, Pixov followed me with a gym bag around his left arm. “So David, did you figure out my ability?”

I smiled in response, “I think I have a clue. Is it sound-related?”

Pixov laughed. “Holy crap, you got it. Yep, I can generate sound-waves through my palms and voice as well as increase and decrease the frequency as I see fit. Good thing I play a Guitar then, it helps ease my sanity.”

“You ever joined a band Pixov? Cause you play a pretty good guitar.”

“I joined one a while back, but they kicked me out when I got too advanced for them.” Pixov replied.

“You ever think they kicked you out because you’re a copycat!” Pixov and I turned around and saw Jay Ino and Duke Zeta standing before us with Jay having an annoyed expression on his face.

“You didn’t think I noticed that you two copied our strategy? How lazy can you get!” Jay shouted.

But while I was a little shaken up by Jay’s shouting, Pixov was still smirking. “Hey, you guys went before us. Not our problem that we managed to take your strategy and improve on it.”

Jay walked closer to Pixov and clenched his fists. “Improved on it! You couldn’t improve that shoddy guitar to save your life let alone improve our strategy!”

Pixov laughed. “You’re just mad that the 7th and 8th best of the Exchange Students division did just as good as the first place of the main division.”

As Pixov spoke, I noticed that Jay’s expression was getting angrier and he began to form a white aura around his body. I didn’t know what his ability was but I was scared to find out.

But before Jay could punch Pixov, the 4 of us heard the sound of thunder nearby. Jay’s aura suddenly stopped and his expression changed from an angry look to his usual cocky look. “What took you so long Decker?”

As they turned left, Pixov and I also turned around to see a man they called Decker Highlander walking towards them. “Jay, it’s not worth starting a fight with these guys. Let’s just go.”

Jay nodded and the three walked away from us to go and antagonize Federico and Andy.  The two of us stood in silence for what seemed like an eternity, until Pixov decided to speak up. “I’m not too worried about that guy David. Neither should you, he’s a cocky douchebag that will get what he deserves later.”

I nodded my head in agreement while still not saying anything. “Anyways, that was our only class for today man so I’ll see you later.”

“Wait don’t you have a room-mate? Why were you partnered with me?” I replied.

Pixov smirked. “My room-mate got expelled for taking steroids or something like that. So I got a room to myself until next semester. What’s your room number David?”

“207”

Pixov laughed. “Looks like we’re neighbours then. I got 208. So how bout we walk down to our dorm rooms then? After all, we’re a team now.”

I decided to laugh along. “I guess we are. Okay, let’s go.”

As we walked to our dorm rooms, we didn’t say anything to the other. I didn’t know what to say to the guy who stood up to the Number 1 student of Santa Verde and I don’t think he had anything to say to me. When we got to our dorm rooms, we finally spoke to each other.

“See ya in tommorow’s class man.” Pixov said with a smirk.

I smiled along. “Thanks. See ya tomorrow as well.”

As he walked into his dorm room, I unlocked my dorm room and went inside. As I got ready for bed, I took off my jacket and unzipped my left pocket. After a couple minutes, I managed to find what I was looking for in that pocket and pulled out a newspaper article. As I read it, I let out a sigh. “If she is attending this school, then she must not know the truth.”

As I put the clipping back into my jacket and zipped the pocket back up, I locked up my dorm room and went to sleep…
David Grimm Chapter 2: First Day of Classes
Here is chapter 2 of my Emerald Chronicles Fan Character story.

Emerald Chronicles was created by :iconzutzucrobat55:
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-Narrator’s POV-

Super Central, a world very similar to the one you and I live on. But unlike Earth, this one is home to both humans and super-humans, beings that had special powers given to them since the day they were born.

But unlike other stories, the humans and super-humans live in peace. But when the peace is disturbed, these super-humans use their powers to protect said peace by becoming a superhero and using their special powers.

Now there are numerous ways to become a superhero, but one of the most popular ways is by attending Santa Verde Academy when they turn 16. This academy is specifically designed to train both humans and super-humans into becoming superheroes with help from the staff, who some say are the most powerful superheroes in United Emerald City.

But today is a special day for this Academy; it’s the first day of School and a lot of new humans and super-humans will soon be arriving to learn how to become a superhero.

One of these students is an exchange student named David. Grimm and his story about how he eventually became a Superhero…

-End of POV-


-David’s POV-

Today is my first day at a new school and I am nervous... Ever since I was a kid, I was living in one of the neighbouring cities to United Emerald City and life was fine. But ever since my mom signed me up for this academy, resulting in us moving here, I haven’t been able to adjust at all. I miss my friends; I miss the things I used to do back there.

But there’s nothing I can do about it now, like a lot of things in life…

But as I got to the front doors, I let out a sigh and a smile formed across my face, putting my previous worries to the side as a result.

“So this is Santa Verde Academy.” It looked very fancy with its ivory stone walkway, the well-trimmed plants and hedges that were next to the front doors and windows. It was visually appealing, and as I entered the academy, my opinion on it was neutral.

“I still don’t like how I got roped into this by my mother, but I guess it’s not too bad.” I said to myself.

As I zipped up my hoodie, I heard the sound of footsteps behind me. But it wasn’t the person walking, it was rapid movement. Oh shit, someone is running!”

As I turned around, I saw a man with yellow hair, dark skin and an open red jacket running towards me. I managed to get out of the way in time, but he kept running until he hit another person with dark skin a few feet away.

As the two were recovering from the impact, I was clenching my fists in anger. “Asshole”. The man didn’t hear what I said thankfully, but I decided to get out of there just in case.

As I was walking down one of the hallways, I noticed a poster on one of the lockers and decided to take a closer look. “New Students: Orientation begins today in the Auditorium.”

Once I finished reading it, I walked away from the locker and began to look for the Auditorium. It took me a couple of minutes, but I was able to find it a few minutes before the Orientation started.

When I walked inside, I noticed that almost all the seats were filled and some of the students were forced to stand because of that. As I went down the numerous rows looking for an open spot, I noticed that there was only one seat left in the G section. As I was about to sit down however, I noticed a tall browned hair girl one row down looking for a spot as well. She had a look of worry on her face, so I decided to walk over to her and give her a tap on the shoulder.

“What do you want, can’t you see I am looking for a spot!” From what I heard, the girl appeared to have a British Accent and was annoyed.

“There’s a spot behind me, you can have it if you want.” I replied.

The girl’s annoyance turned into a smile. “Thanks. But it’s the last one.”

I chuckled, “It’s all good, I can stand. Now take the seat before someone else steals it.”

The girl nodded her head and walked off, while I walked over to the wall near the entrance.

A few minutes later, 7 people walked onto the stage to give a speech. They claimed to be the staff of the Academy and the one with the dark blonde hair was the Headmaster. His name was Vandel.  The rest of the speech was fine but my feeling of neutrality was quickly shattered when the daughter of the Headmaster announced that all of the students would now be judged on their strengths in what she called “The Doomsday Test”.

My eyes quickly widened after hearing that, I didn’t think I would be judged this quickly; it was only the first day. My palms began to sweat as a feeling of nervousness washed over me. But before I could do anything else, I was teleported away alongside the other students.

When my physical body returned, I was now in a forest surrounded by Pine Trees and thick grass. “So this is the Doomsday Test?” I said aloud.

“This seems too easy.” I then shook my head in response. “No, there’s got to be more than this. If I got transported to a forest, then odds are a creature would be in the ground. Just in case, I got to find a way to get above ground level.”

As I looked around for about a minute, I found a tree with a low enough branch for me to jump on to. As I grabbed on to the branch, I slowly crawled over to the center of the tree and slowly climbed up. It took a couple minutes, but once I reached the top I saw the enemy. It was a giant Mega Charizard X.

My eyes widened as I whispered to myself, “A.A Dragon? Crap…”

I’m not sure if the Dragon heard me or not, but he began to turn around. Scared, I climbed down the tree a bit so that he couldn’t see my body. As I heard the dragon’s footsteps get closer and closer, my worry began to increase. “Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit.”

As the minutes slowly ticked by, I heard it get closer and closer to the tree I was in. As soon as I saw one of his feet at the base, I knew it was going to be the end if I didn’t do something. My worry quickly dissipated as anger began to sweep over me. “Okay, that’s it. I got to do something quick. I gotta try.”

As the Charizard began to rip the tree out of the ground, Mounty placed both of his hands on the tree and closed his eyes.  Just then, Charizard ripped the tree out and began to lift it up towards its mouth. But as soon as the top of the tree touched his teeth…

CRACK

The Mega Charizard cried out in pain as it felt its teeth crack, dropping the tree as a result. David tried to hold on to the center of the tree as hard as he could as it began to fall. But before he lost his grip, the tree had landed on the ground without a scratch. Shocked, David opened his eyes and understood why. The tree had grown legs on the bottom and two of its branches were used as arms. David smiled and patted the tree. “Thanks man that was a close one.”

The tree lifted one of its branches and altered the twigs in said branch to create a thumbs up.

But this moment was short-lived as the branch was blown off by a Fire Blast. Mega Charizard X had recovered from its pain and began to attack the tree.

The legs went first, resulting in the tree collapsing to the ground. Then it took off the other branch the tree was using as a hand. As Mega Charizard X was doing this however, I managed to get away from the Tree and run deep into the forest.

But as I was running, I didn’t notice the giant branch in front of me and I ended up tripping over it and hit the ground hard. I tried to get back up and continue running, but Charizard appeared and used Iron Tail on my back.

But before the attack hit him, the environment around him changed and he woke up in a hospital bed.

As I slowly got up, I rubbed the back of my head in confusion. “Well shoot, I thought it would’ve worked…”

As I observed my surroundings, I noticed that the room I was in turned out to be the Nurse’s Room. “Stupid David… You can’t do anything right!” I said to myself in anger.

But before I attacked myself in further, I heard an announcement on the P.A announcing that the Test was over.

After hearing that, I decided to pick myself up and walk out of the room. Once I closed the door, I noticed a bunch of people, including the guy in green standing in front of a giant board. As the others were reacting to their rankings from the test, I noticed that the board was split between the Exchange Students and Non-Exchange students. It took me a while but I was able to find my ranking eventually and I face palmed. “Damn it.”

“What are you complaining about?” I turned around and noticed that the person who said that was a guy with gray wings, gray skin and wore a swimmer’s cap and goggles.

“Hello sir, I was just looking for my ranking.”

The guy in gray snickered. “No need to be formal with me man, it’s not manly. Anyways, I got to find my ranking so can you get out of my way?”

I agreed to the guy’s request and got out of his way. He was silent for a minute, though I couldn’t tell what was going through his mind due to his goggles overlapping his eyes. But once he found his ranking, he snickered. “Neat, I got 7th rank. That’s awesome.” He then turned around to face me. “But it also appears this guy named David got 7th rank in the Exchange Student section.”

I rubbed the back of my head in confusion while giving a half-assed smile. “Congratulations.”

The man in gray smirked and walked off. As soon as he did however, I took a look at the other side of the board to find out that guy’s name. ”Wait, his name is Danson?”

But after I read that, I just shrugged my head in annoyance. ”Never mind. I could do so much better than this.”

I decided to walk away as soon as that blonde guy showed up and I arrived at my dorm room not too long after. When I opened the door however, I noticed that I didn’t have a room-mate.  As I looked around the room, I found a note on the table. When I picked it up, it read “Dear Mr.Grimm. Due to the 8th ranking member of the Exchange Students program getting expelled, you will have no room-mate for this semester. Signed Headmaster. Vandel”

Once I finished reading the note, I put it back on the table and just shrugged it off. “Whatever. As long as it’s not that red/green guy, I think I am good without a room-mate…”

    TO BE CONTINUED
David Grimm Chapter 1: First Day at Santa Verde
I did a thing :D

Emerald Chronicles is owned by :iconzutzucrobat55:
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Hey lookie, another segment stolen from :iconzutzucrobat55: :D
Now I just got to steal his Captain Yanmega series and my totally evil plan will be complete :meow:

But in all seriousness, :iconsusanlucariofan16: requested me to do a review of her series thus far and that's why we're here :)

Now just to give a quick disclaimer: Even though she is my girlfriend, that doesn't mean I will be cutting her any slack if she fucks up on something.

If I did have bias for her show because of that factor, I might as well change my name to Nathan Grayson.

Now let's get my opinion of her show out of the way.

Susan's Total Pokemon Island is SusanLucarioFan16's first attempt at a Total Pokemon series. The show takes place on an island and has 22+ contestants competing for a large sum of money.

Let's start with the negatives of the show.

Problem #1: The Concept
Even at the time this came out(which was 2012 for those curious), the concept of a TPI series starting on an island was bland and generic and was starting to become frowned upon by the Community.

As such, the concept of this show is very bland.

Problem #2: The Characters
Another problem I have with the show is that some of the contestants feel bland and generic. Stop me if you heard this before: A rich Pokemon that acts like a bitch to people or is the villain of the season.  The Cute/Naive Pokemon that is oblivious to what is going on with strategies/villain plans. The Cute guy/girl that is secretly the villain.

Yeah, not very original is it? Now this part is a bit of a double-edged sword because there are some characters that I do like, and I will discuss that in the Positives.

Problem #3: The Gameplay
While not the worst, this TPI doesn't do a good job in my opinion with the Gameplay. Ignoring the viewer's vote scenarios, some of the eliminations as well as certain strategic moments feel incredibly contrived or head-scratching. Take Episode 9 for example, where a bunch of people believe Cubchoo despite his sprite being different. Oh yeah, totally Cubchoo.

Another issue I have is that some of the eliminations make no sense. They eliminate characters with lots of character or lots of potential to them but keep characters with barely any personality?

What the hell?

As for the challenges, they are okay. Not too bad, not too original though. But they are okay.

Now let's get to the positives.

As I mentioned before, I do like some characters. Such as Grotle, Honchkrow, Chansey, Cubchoo(the nice one that is), Lucario, and Pupitar.

I also think the host is a nice change from the stereotypical hosts that act like Chris Motherfucckinclain since Susan actually gives a shit about her contestants.

Another positive I can give to the show is that it handled the viewers vote concept much better than other TPI's and this was largely because the creator actually listened to the people voting.

But that's about it.

Overall Thoughts:
Overall, I think this show is decent. While I did present three issues and two positives, the 2nd one was more like a half-issue, half positive.

While not the worst TPI I have seen(that would so far be Shinx's Island of Trials), it doesn't do much new either. But I do see effort put into this and unlike someone like Nicki, she has a legit reason on why it's taking a while. Does it completely excuse it? Fuck no, but it's at least a reason.

So that concludes my thoughts on Susan's TPI. What'd you think of her show or this note? Let me know in the comments below.

Take care :)

 
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Hey lookie, another segment stolen from :iconzutzucrobat55: :D
Now I just got to steal his Captain Yanmega series and my totally evil plan will be complete :meow:

But in all seriousness, :iconsusanlucariofan16: requested me to do a review of her series thus far and that's why we're here :)

Now just to give a quick disclaimer: Even though she is my girlfriend, that doesn't mean I will be cutting her any slack if she fucks up on something.

If I did have bias for her show because of that factor, I might as well change my name to Nathan Grayson.

Now let's get my opinion of her show out of the way.

Susan's Total Pokemon Island is SusanLucarioFan16's first attempt at a Total Pokemon series. The show takes place on an island and has 22+ contestants competing for a large sum of money.

Let's start with the negatives of the show.

Problem #1: The Concept
Even at the time this came out(which was 2012 for those curious), the concept of a TPI series starting on an island was bland and generic and was starting to become frowned upon by the Community.

As such, the concept of this show is very bland.

Problem #2: The Characters
Another problem I have with the show is that some of the contestants feel bland and generic. Stop me if you heard this before: A rich Pokemon that acts like a bitch to people or is the villain of the season.  The Cute/Naive Pokemon that is oblivious to what is going on with strategies/villain plans. The Cute guy/girl that is secretly the villain.

Yeah, not very original is it? Now this part is a bit of a double-edged sword because there are some characters that I do like, and I will discuss that in the Positives.

Problem #3: The Gameplay
While not the worst, this TPI doesn't do a good job in my opinion with the Gameplay. Ignoring the viewer's vote scenarios, some of the eliminations as well as certain strategic moments feel incredibly contrived or head-scratching. Take Episode 9 for example, where a bunch of people believe Cubchoo despite his sprite being different. Oh yeah, totally Cubchoo.

Another issue I have is that some of the eliminations make no sense. They eliminate characters with lots of character or lots of potential to them but keep characters with barely any personality?

What the hell?

As for the challenges, they are okay. Not too bad, not too original though. But they are okay.

Now let's get to the positives.

As I mentioned before, I do like some characters. Such as Grotle, Honchkrow, Chansey, Cubchoo(the nice one that is), Lucario, and Pupitar.

I also think the host is a nice change from the stereotypical hosts that act like Chris Motherfucckinclain since Susan actually gives a shit about her contestants.

Another positive I can give to the show is that it handled the viewers vote concept much better than other TPI's and this was largely because the creator actually listened to the people voting.

But that's about it.

Overall Thoughts:
Overall, I think this show is decent. While I did present three issues and two positives, the 2nd one was more like a half-issue, half positive.

While not the worst TPI I have seen(that would so far be Shinx's Island of Trials), it doesn't do much new either. But I do see effort put into this and unlike someone like Nicki, she has a legit reason on why it's taking a while. Does it completely excuse it? Fuck no, but it's at least a reason.

So that concludes my thoughts on Susan's TPI. What'd you think of her show or this note? Let me know in the comments below.

Take care :)

 
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Fun fact: I managed to rewrite some of the TD season plots through the power of Super Mario.
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What's your YouTube name??
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Kiriyawave. But for my TPI's, it will be LeafeonLive.
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