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Earlier today, I was watching the animated film: Batman: Year One on Netflix and when I finished watching it, a thought came to me. "This movie had a good idea but the execution of the film wasn't that good", and that's when I got the idea to talk about this.

A lot of people who do Total Pokemon Island will come out with ideas that either no one before them thought of or executed well to make their show stand out from the dime-a-dozen TPI's you see on Youtube. While some of these do work out pretty well, the problem comes in for the ideas that are executed terribly.

When this occurs, the results are either the equivalent of slap on the wrist from viewers, or you get harshly criticized by the community if the idea was that bad.

Let me list some examples of this.

Examples
  • Having an alternate personality that barely anyone likes be in control of the body for several episodes(Jenna, Abstogekiss,Frosquire).
  • Hypnotism
  • Have the character rape/fuck another Hot Coffee style.
  • Blackmailing a character but have the blackmail be something minor/not that important in the grand scheme of things.
  • Have your character engage in anything related to a fetish.
  • Having a Robot.

When I see these examples, most of the time its met with either hate, dislike or lack of caring from the viewers and a large reason as to why this happens is largely because of the execution. I've seen Examples 1,2, and 4 work out pretty well with certain TPI creators, but I have not seen a TPI creator execute Examples 3 and 5 work out at all and yet I see these two examples happen every now and again.

It's great to have a unique idea for your show, but sometimes it might be best to keep it in your head if it's an idea that a lot of people will hate.

As someone who has made more than 10 seasons of a TPI, I know that all too well. Now some may argue "But you just said it's great to have a unique idea for your show! How can you say right after that that sometimes it might be best to keep it in your head!"

Because when people aren't on a leash and let their mind roam to certain places, we get stuff like this: Sloberus World(Prologue)It was a day that no one could’ve expected. Multiple worlds have had Pokémon living on those planets, and much like the main world of Pokémon they had suffered various incidents throughout it’s time, but this was something that no one could’ve stopped.
No one knew what was the idea for it or who created it, but one day a deadly virus broke out of a top secret laboratory and quickly became airborne before the scientists could stop it in time. With no one able to stop the virus, it quickly spread throughout the world, infecting the seas as well as the earth around us.
However, this virus was only affecting the Pokémon; the humans were somehow immune to the virus. But instead of this being a sigh of relief for humans, this would only be the calm before the storm, and once that storm hit, the human race would be wiped off the face of this planet.
A few weeks had passed and the infected Pokémon began to feel worse as a result of the virus evolving. Thei



That's right, I initially planned that crap out 4 years ago to be used in my series at a later point. There's a reason why I ditched it because if I did write that in, I would get mauled to pieces faster than throwing a guy into an arena with hungry pitbulls.

So what can be done about this? Well, if you have an idea for your show, maybe try running it by a few of your friends or something. If they don't mind it, then go ahead and do it.

If your mind doesn't go to dark places then maybe ask yourself "Do I really want people to see this?". If your answer is yes, then give it a shot.

That is all I have to say on this, so let me know what you think of this and I'll see you later =D

  • Mood: Cheerful
  • Listening to: My Little Reviews: Hearts and Hooves Day
Infinite realities. Infinite possibilities. These factors shape the very universe around us and the worlds that we live in.

However our story begins on a planet very similar to our own: Earth. But unlike our planet, this world is home to humans who evolved from mutated creatures instead of Monkeys.

Some of them have the power to create/take away life, some have the power to control the elements, and some of them can even reach into other dimensions.

One of these humans is Dave, the son of a tall blonde-haired man named Vincent and a medium-sized brown-haired woman named Artemis.

Dave had inherited the same eye color of his father, but his hair color was inherited from his mother.

Growing up, Dave figured out that much like other humans on this planet, he had special abilities as well. By the age of 5, his parents realized that he had inherited his mother’s special ability of controlling fire, and by the age of 7, his father realized that Dave could give an inanimate object life, though only for a few seconds.

After this revelation, Vincent and Artemis spent the next few years teaching their son how to control his special abilities after School and Artemis taught Dave to only use his powers for good.

But while this training was going on, Vincent and Artemis’ marriage was beginning to crack. Vincent didn’t want his son to inherit his abilities and he slowly begun to hate his son for it, which resulted in Vincent and Artemis getting into several fights that ended badly for Artemis since Vincent was much stronger than her.

But although this was going on behind the scenes, Vincent and Artemis still trained their son and acted as if nothing was wrong in order to keep Dave happy. But little did they know, Dave had his own problems that he couldn’t talk to them about.

Dave was a common target for bullies at school. When he wasn’t getting shoved into lockers, he didn’t have many friends to talk to and most of the people he tried to talk too ended up making fun of him.  All of this resulted in Dave being a depressed wreck of a person.

He decided to hold those emotions in instead of telling his parents about this issue because he thought they would treat him as a defected freak and shun him if he told them about this.

But these emotions would eventually come out on his 10th birthday. When he woke up and went downstairs to get some breakfast, he noticed his mother sitting at the table with a cup of coffee in hand and a note.

He was confused by the lack of his father in the room but his mother explained to him that Vincent left them last night after she had another fight with him and he hasn’t been seen since.

After this revelation, Dave breaks down crying, blaming himself for the fights his parents have been having lately and he believes that if it wasn’t for him, they’d still be together. After hearing this, Artemis calms her son down and reassures him that it wasn’t his fault for what happened between her and Vincent.

After this break-down, Dave admitted his problems to his mother and she managed to get him into Therapy to help him deal with his issues. As a result, Artemis found out that Dave had issues with Anxiety and after Dave was able to get over his Depression, Artemis brought him to a doctor to help her son deal with Anxiety.

It took a while but eventually Dave was able to find a way to control his anxiety issues and live a normal life around the time he entered High School.

At this point, he was still bullied and had few friends, but Dave was able to stand up for himself and was able to graduate and move on to College.

As for his mother, she found love again in a Construction worker named Salamanca, who had the power to create objects thanks to his willpower. After Artemis and Salamanca got married, Dave had a Step-Father in his life, as well as a younger step-sister who occasionally fights with him but ultimately cares about her step-brother.

But near the end of his High School year, he had heard about a certain kind of video that a lot of people at the High School were enjoying. They were called Countdowns and this gave Dave the motivation to try it out. But first he had to come up with a name.

It took him a while but he was eventually able to come up with the title of “The Mounty Chief” and made his first Countdown. His first year of making Countdowns wasn’t that great but he kept pushing forward and he slowly got better at it, while also having his share of enemies.

Around his 2nd year of making Countdowns, he tried to bring in a friend to help him by giving a set of Wolf Plushies life but it didn’t work out that well.

But he was eventually able to give an inanimate object life when he tried his ability out on a Riolu and not only was it able to speak, but it was also able to move and have emotions like a human being. Dave was ecstatic, not only was he able to create life, he created life in a Pokemon he liked. He gave this Riolu the name of Tutèúr and they became the best of friends.

Eventually, Dave decided to change his Countdown name to “The Mounty” since he felt the Chief part sounded a little pretentious and he had become friends with more people thanks to this hobby than he ever did in High School.

To this day, Vincent has never been found but Dave doesn’t care about him anymore. He has good friends, a great family and he is looking forward to whatever life has to throw in his way.

The End
The Mounty Chief(Origin Story)
I got bored today, so I decided to give my Countdown Persona: The Mounty Chief/The Mounty an origin story.

Let me know what you think of this and if you have any issues with the story, let me know about them as well =D

Note: As you can expect, The Mounty and I are two different people and this origin story proves that. If you saw my Draw My Life video and then read this, you will notice several differences such as the family issues as well as the name changes.

But ya :P
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Hello everyone, it's Kiriyawave/LeafeonLive.

I decided to post this on Deviantart to try and spread the word about this series as best as I can.

A month after I did those reactions to the first season of Clannad, my friends( :iconfawnthewatermaster: , :iconbayocakes98: , :iconsusanlucariofan16: , :iconpichuxcastform123: , :icontreecko101piplup: , :iconzutzucrobat55: ) and I have begun doing reaction highlights to episodes of Clannad After Story, starting from the 1st episode to the Season Finale.

As of this posting, I am halfway through the season, so expect this journal entry to be updated every now and again to include Episodes 13-24.

And to those who have seen After Story, you will see my reaction to a certain character's dirt-nap ;)

For those interested in checking these out, a link to the Episodes will be provided in this Journal.

Note: These do not contain the full episode, just specific moments of the Episode that my friends and I enjoyed the most from the reaction.

Also, these reactions contain swearing, so viewer discretion is advised for those who don't like swearing.

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  • Mood: Cheerful
  • Listening to: It Has To Be This Way~ Reincarnation Remix
Hello everyone, it's Kiriyawave/LeafeonLive.

I decided to post this on Deviantart to try and spread the word about this series as best as I can.

Since January of this year, my friends( :iconsusanlucariofan16: , :iconpichuxcastform123: , :icontreecko101piplup: , :iconzutzucrobat55: ) and I have been doing reaction highlights to episodes of the 2008 Anime Clannad , starting from the 16th episode to the Season Finale.

As of this posting, I have also begun reactions to Clannad After Story, its second season but that will be its own separate Journal.

For those interested in checking these out, a link to the Episodes will be provided in this Journal.

Note: These do not contain the full episode, just specific moments of the Episode that my friends and I enjoyed the most from the reaction.

Also, these reactions contain swearing, so viewer discretion is advised for those who don't like swearing.

Episodes:

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  • Mood: Cheerful
  • Listening to: It Has To Be This Way~ Reincarnation Remix
An hour had passed since May's match with David took place and now both May and Dawn was ready to face each other in the final round.

After wishing each other good luck, they walked into the Contest Arena and the announcer began to speak.
Contest Arena

"Hello everyone, and welcome to the finals! To my left is May from Petalburg City and to my right is Dawn from Sandgem Town!"

As the audience cheered in applause, Marian walked over to the judges and pressed a red button.

All of a sudden, the main arena became cloaked in a giant transparent rectangle that was tall enough to reach the ceiling and wide enough to reach the walls.

As May and Dawn looked on in shock, Marian began to speak once again. "For this final match, we decided to spice it up a little bit. The rectangle is a virtual reality arena that will change the location you two are in. This match will be a Single Battle. If a Coordinator loses 50 percent of their total points, or their Pokémon faints, the other Coordinator will get a point. The first Coordinator to get 1 point wins the Ultimate Coordinator Pokémon Contest. So without any further delay, let's select the first arena."

Marian then proceeded to snap her fingers and the virtual reality arena was transformed into a Jungle-like setting.

"Let the first round begin!"

May then reached into her turban and pulled out her Pokémon for the round. This will be interesting. I don't know what Dawn has up her sleeve for this match, so I will have to think of a good plan to win. I can't lose this. "Venusaur, let's go."


May then threw her Pokeball into the air and Venusaur appeared in the Jungle-like arena.

Dawn was surprised by May's choice but she ignored it for now and selected her Pokémon. "Lopunny, I choose you."


She then threw her Pokeball into the air and her Lopunny appeared in the arena standing on one of the tree branches.

Once the two Pokémon appeared in the arena, the match began.

"Venusaur, use Toxic Spikes!"

"I see what you're doing May. Lopunny, jump to the next tree and use Magic Coat."

Venusaur started the match by launching her Toxic Spikes into the air. Although most of the Toxic Spikes hit the ground, Lopunny was protected by her Magic Coat technique and the spikes that bounced off of the attack hit the trees near Lopunny and they began to melt the leaves.

As May's point total decreased, she issued her next command. "Venusaur, use Petal Dance!"

"Lopunny, spin in the air and use Ice Beam!"

As Venusaur launched her Petal Dance into the air, combining with some of the Toxic Spikes on the ground, Lopunny jumped into the air while also spinning and combined her Ice Beam attack with the spin to create an Ice Tornado, destroying the Toxic Spikes in the trees and creating a beautiful spectacle in the air once it dissipated. But before Lopunny could land on one of the trees, she suffered a direct hit from the Poisoned Petal Dance and crashed into the ground.

As May and Dawn's point totals decreased, the arena became affected by Lopunny's Ice Tornado attack as it transformed into more of an Arctic Tundra than a Jungle.

May and Dawn began to shiver as a result of the change, but a shield appeared around them shortly after to protect them from the cold.

"Venusaur, use Petal Dance again!"

"Lopunny, use Dizzy Punch to break up the ice!"

Venusaur tried to fire a Petal Dance at Lopunny, but her petals became partially frozen by the cold and she was unable to attack, while Lopunny tried to use her attack on the Tundra but it ended up phasing through the ice and did nothing.

"Venusaur, use Sunny Day!"

"Lopunny, use Magic Coat!"

As Lopunny prepared her Magic Coat attack, Venusaur was eventually able to launch her Sunny Day attack into the air and warm the two Pokémon up.

But as the sun began to work its magic the arena began to change once again, but this time it begun to look more like an ocean with mini islands for the Pokémon and Coordinators to stand on.

As the two Coordinators took another point decrease, Dawn issued her next command to Lopunny.

"Lopunny, try and jump into the water and use Dizzy Punch."

"Venusaur, prepare your Solarbeam attack!"

Lopunny tried to jump into the water and unlike the Tundra; she was actually able to interact with the environment as she dove down into the water and began to use her Dizzy Punch attack to create a Water Tornado in the arena as Venusaur launched her Solarbeam, cancelling out the two attacks.

"Lopunny, jump out of the water and use Ice Beam!"

Lopunny complied with her trainer's request and jumped out of the water thanks to her Bounce attack and prepared to launch her Ice Beam attack at May's Venusaur. But May was prepared for this as the minute Lopunny got out of the water, she was bombarbed by a Petal Dance attack which screwed up Lopunny's vision for a little bit but she was still able to prepare her Ice Beam attack.

"Now Venusaur, finish it off with Solarbeam!"

As Lopunny's vision was beginning to return, she fired her Ice Beam attack at Venusaur. But at the same time, Venusaur fired her Solarbeam at Lopunny and when the two attacks collided, it created a beam struggle.

The struggle went on for about a minute and it didn't look like either Pokémon was giving up as they continued firing their attacks at each other. But this beam struggle was beginning to affect the area around them as the water began to vibrate, eventually transforming into tidal waves that began to flood some of the islands around the two Pokémon.

May and Dawn were beginning to suffer the effects of the beam struggle as the tidal waves began affecting their islands as well, almost completely covering them in water. The amount of space that was left for them to stand on was less than 10 centimeters wide. They knew that if they wanted to remain standing, they had to end this battle quickly.

As the beam struggle continued on, Venusaur began to emit a green aura from her body, and her Solarbeam attack slowly began to increase in strength.

As May looked on with a surprised look, Dawn had a shocked expression on her face. If that activates, I'll lose!

She tried to give a command to her Lopunny, but it was too late. The Solarbeam attack overpowered her Ice Beam

attack and Lopunny was caught in the blast, creating a huge explosion in the arena.

A minute passed before Marian shut off the Virtual Reality and the explosion began to dissipate, revealing the winner.

"The winner of the Ultimate Coordinator Pokemon Contest is…."

Once the explosion completely dissipated, Venusaur was still standing and Lopunny was on one of the remaining islands with swirls around her eyes.

"May!"

While the audience roared with applause, May and Dawn had surprised looks on their faces. They were surprised at the results and it took them about a minute to process it.

But after that minute, May had an excited look on her face as she raised her hands in the air. "Yes!"

After May spoke, Dawn was the next to react with a short sigh before it changed into a smile.

Once May and Dawn returned their Pokémon to their Pokeballs they walked over to the center of the arena and gave each other a handshake, congratulating each other for the great match.

Shortly after the match concluded, the closing ceremony of the Ultimate Coordinator Pokemon Contest had taken place with May receiving a golden trophy as a prize, Dawn getting a silver trophy as a prize for getting second place, and David getting a bronze trophy as a prize for getting third place.

But once the ceremony concluded, almost every Coordinator met outside the Contest Hall to give their goodbyes to the other.

May was the first to break the ice. "So now that this is over, what will you guys do now?"

Dawn was the first to answer. "Well, I'm going to the Kalos Region to try my hand at the Kalos Pokémon Contests while also trying to discover more Mega Stones."

"I see. David, what about you?"

David answered with. "Well, Trish and I are heading back to the Johto region. We both got Pokémon to take care of and after that's done, we're planning to get a place of our own."

Zoey was the next to respond. "Nando and I are going to be practicing for the next Pokémon Contest. So next time we fight Dawn, I'll be ready." Zoey then smiled.

Following Zoey's response was Suzy. "Frank and I are going back to the Hoenn region to compete in these new Contests called Super Contests."

After hearing Suzy's response, May smirked and responded with. "Funny you mention that Suzy because me and Drew are also heading to the Hoenn region, so we might catch up with you guys."

Suzy then smirked. "Maybe we will."

After the Coordinators had a good laugh about it, they all went their separate ways and left Slateport City.

But someday soon, they may reunite once again to compete for the title of the Ultimate Coordinator..

The End,
Ultimate Coordinator Finale!
The Final Chapter of the Ultimate Coordinator is now released :D (Big Grin)

Pokemon is owned by Nintendo
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Earlier today, I was watching the animated film: Batman: Year One on Netflix and when I finished watching it, a thought came to me. "This movie had a good idea but the execution of the film wasn't that good", and that's when I got the idea to talk about this.

A lot of people who do Total Pokemon Island will come out with ideas that either no one before them thought of or executed well to make their show stand out from the dime-a-dozen TPI's you see on Youtube. While some of these do work out pretty well, the problem comes in for the ideas that are executed terribly.

When this occurs, the results are either the equivalent of slap on the wrist from viewers, or you get harshly criticized by the community if the idea was that bad.

Let me list some examples of this.

Examples
  • Having an alternate personality that barely anyone likes be in control of the body for several episodes(Jenna, Abstogekiss,Frosquire).
  • Hypnotism
  • Have the character rape/fuck another Hot Coffee style.
  • Blackmailing a character but have the blackmail be something minor/not that important in the grand scheme of things.
  • Have your character engage in anything related to a fetish.
  • Having a Robot.

When I see these examples, most of the time its met with either hate, dislike or lack of caring from the viewers and a large reason as to why this happens is largely because of the execution. I've seen Examples 1,2, and 4 work out pretty well with certain TPI creators, but I have not seen a TPI creator execute Examples 3 and 5 work out at all and yet I see these two examples happen every now and again.

It's great to have a unique idea for your show, but sometimes it might be best to keep it in your head if it's an idea that a lot of people will hate.

As someone who has made more than 10 seasons of a TPI, I know that all too well. Now some may argue "But you just said it's great to have a unique idea for your show! How can you say right after that that sometimes it might be best to keep it in your head!"

Because when people aren't on a leash and let their mind roam to certain places, we get stuff like this: Sloberus World(Prologue)It was a day that no one could’ve expected. Multiple worlds have had Pokémon living on those planets, and much like the main world of Pokémon they had suffered various incidents throughout it’s time, but this was something that no one could’ve stopped.
No one knew what was the idea for it or who created it, but one day a deadly virus broke out of a top secret laboratory and quickly became airborne before the scientists could stop it in time. With no one able to stop the virus, it quickly spread throughout the world, infecting the seas as well as the earth around us.
However, this virus was only affecting the Pokémon; the humans were somehow immune to the virus. But instead of this being a sigh of relief for humans, this would only be the calm before the storm, and once that storm hit, the human race would be wiped off the face of this planet.
A few weeks had passed and the infected Pokémon began to feel worse as a result of the virus evolving. Thei



That's right, I initially planned that crap out 4 years ago to be used in my series at a later point. There's a reason why I ditched it because if I did write that in, I would get mauled to pieces faster than throwing a guy into an arena with hungry pitbulls.

So what can be done about this? Well, if you have an idea for your show, maybe try running it by a few of your friends or something. If they don't mind it, then go ahead and do it.

If your mind doesn't go to dark places then maybe ask yourself "Do I really want people to see this?". If your answer is yes, then give it a shot.

That is all I have to say on this, so let me know what you think of this and I'll see you later =D

  • Mood: Cheerful
  • Listening to: My Little Reviews: Hearts and Hooves Day

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BeekerMaroo777 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Student General Artist
Fun fact: I managed to rewrite some of the TD season plots through the power of Super Mario.
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DarkWolfWavius Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Cool =D
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DarkWolfWavius Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Interesting
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SusanLucarioFan16 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
happy birthday
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DarkWolfWavius Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Thanx =)
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welcome
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TotalPokemonIslandWT Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
What's your YouTube name??
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DarkWolfWavius Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Kiriyawave. But for my TPI's, it will be LeafeonLive.
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and thank you very much
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