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A Mimic(Shiny.Coordinator Origin Story)

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Earth, Fire, Air, Water. These are the four elements that make up the planet Earth and allow its inhabitants to survive.


But on one of these Earth’s, Some are able to bend these elements to their whim because their ancestors had mutated DNA that changed their bodies so much that it gifted them unique abilities that could either help the world or end it.

But not everyone on this planet has abilities to bend the elements. Some people have more, practical abilities. One of these people is Susan.Magex, the red haired daughter of a tall brown haired man named Eddie and a medium-sized woman with blond hair named Jessie.

Eddie had the ability to copy people’s abilities, while Jessie had the ability to talk to any creature that wasn’t as intelligent as humans.

As Susan grew up however, her parents noticed that their daughter wasn’t able to use any of their abilities. They were confused about this since everyone else they knew had abilities, but their daughter didn’t seem to have any.

They attempted to take her to a doctor when she was 4 to find out what was wrong with her, but the doctor told them that she was fine. As time went on, they continued to train with their daughter and tried to see if she would unlock her abilities, but it didn’t work.

And as for Susan, she didn’t feel miserable about this issue, but rather confused about it. Outside of their training sessions however, her parents raised her without any issues and clearly expressed care and affection for their child.

By the time she entered school, life seemed normal for her. She occasionally had to deal with bullies, but she also had a lot of friends thanks to her happy go lucky personality, who could also help her if she had any issue her parents couldn’t help her with. But as the years went on, Susan began to slowly develop an inferiority complex due to her not being able to use any abilities that her friends and family were able to do. As such, she felt like she couldn’t accomplish as much and this also caused her to go into a depression.

Her parents quickly noticed this and tried to help her, but nothing they did seemed to work. They tried a therapist, they tried to cheer her up, but nothing worked. As Susan fell deeper and deeper into a depression, the bullying also increased and unlike before when her friends could help, she slowly began to isolate herself from them.

This all eventually culminated one day in 9th grade when she was walking home. She got jumped near a Local Rec Center by some local bullies that were picking on her earlier that day and she got the tar beaten out of her. As she was leaning against a concrete wall covered in her own blood and with wounds all over, she thought she was going to die and got scared. And as the leader of the bullies got ready to punch her in the stomach one more time, she closed her eyes in horror. But as the bully hit her stomach, she felt blood going down her shirt but didn’t feel any pain. As she slowly opened her eyes, she saw what had happened. The blood that was going down her shirt was from the leader of the bullies’ fist.

As the bullies retreated before the police showed up, Susan lost her footing and hit the ground. As she held her left arm in pain however, her eyes widened at the sight. Her right arm was the same color as the concrete she was holding. It took her a few minutes to put two and two together but she eventually realized what happened. She was able to mimic the properties of the Concrete by simply touching it. After realizing this however, her arm returned to normal a few seconds before she lost consciousness.

She woke up a few hours later in the hospital covered in bandages. As she tried to analyze what happened, a doctor came in and told her that after the police showed up, they called an Ambulance due to how severe the blood loss was. The doctor also says that she will make a full recovery in a couple days. As he leaves the room, Susan feels good that she survived that encounter and also felt proud of herself for unlocking her ability after so long.

After a couple of days, she was let go from the hospital and returned home. After that, she returned to training with her family and slowly returned to her happy go lucky personality. During the next couple years, she slowly began to figure out her powers more and more, such as her being able to copy someone’s abilities or the properties of an inanimate object and combine it with her current strength, while also discovering the limits of said abilities such as only being able to use it for about 10 minutes, and when it comes to copying someone’s abilities, the person has to be okay with it first.

But when she wasn’t training, she also spent some of her free time either caring for animals at her mother’s animal shelter or talking with some of her friends on Skype. Some of her new friends she made from Skype included those from Canada, such as The Mounty, or people like Fawn. While it was weird for her to talk to people thousands of kilometers away, they did share similar interests as her and seemed to be about her age. But she felt that in order to protect her identity, she decided to give herself a different name on Skype. The Shiny Coordinator.

By the time she graduated high school, she had decided to be an animal care-taker due to how much she loved taking care of animals. But while she was attending College and getting her G.E.D, she got a part-time job in her town’s government building creating videos to help advertise the town to potential citizens who wish to move there.

And while she wishes that she could accomplish more with life, Susan seems content with her current life and is looking forward to the future.
Since the last story seemed to do well, I decided to give The Mounty's friend an origin story.

Let me know what you think of this and if you have any issues with the story, let me know about them as well =D (Big Grin)

But ya :P (Lick)
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